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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I'm not really sure what prompted this one..It makes sense to me but I'm curious to know if it does to you. A time encountering moment, the beauty deep within Left to weep away in quickening sadness With the last sweet caress of skin The tapestry of thought provoking images The intricacy of the mind and it's illusions Keeping the steady heartbeat to it's pulsing rhythm All that always has been and all that always was Show in elobrate facades the need for pure simplicity In the showering of life forms from within the soul As in all things paranormal to ourselves We look through a twisted mirrored glass At an idea controverisal to our expression of difference So for the fleeting moment, of the sight inside what we already know We cling to what is knowledgeable, something happy in abstraction to which we hold that last soft caress of our essence Through the beauty of skin to the mind Always strive for excellence never perfection. ~Bella~ [This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (04-23-2003 11:50 PM).] |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
I'm surprised this wonderful poem hadn't gotten any replys yet. I love the way it moves, like fluid, and speaks. Well done! ^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
you strive for excellence and you have surely achived it..I sit now in envy of this beautiful work...however, this must be my stupid day, because this is the second time today that I couldn't quite put a grasp on the meaning...I'm quite sure it's not a matter of vague writing, but more likely of the stupid pill I inedvertantly ingested today...great work...should've made it a book submission. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Thanks for the replies you guys. I was sad that it hadn't gotten any but now it has a few yay! Jeremy don't worry I'm sure it's just one of those days..The meaning is kind of hard to grasp but it is done so on purpose so that it could be taken several different ways to the reader! Anyways thanks again for the comments ~Live and Laugh~ Always strive for excellence never perfection. |
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