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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
Haunting Amidst a forest I stand alone The trees a dead gray, Drenched in dark, deathly vines Are my companions The darkness of the night surrounds us distorting us In the state of mental and physical vulnerability The chilling breeze blows boisterously I stand firm Not wavering Nor conquering Twisted pictures haunting me Visions of abhorrence and hatred Sights of death’s horrid face I hear the voice of Satan And I give in to the burden The weight on my shoulders I fall the ground And I hear him laugh The trees groan with defeat I lie low Drowning in my adolescence |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
sounds like a dream, the bad kind influences by the subconscious guilt and fear that we all expirience for our own reasons...great poem. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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SCREAMIN Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 51US, Tx |
You don’t know the pain in her life You don’t know the heartache, the tears, the strife I am not content to sit here and watch As they mutilate her with every touch You don’t understand the things she’s known You cant comprehend the fear she’s out grown And I am not content to know the pain I want to feel the tears, and the strain You don’t know how she used to cry You didn’t see her as she’d scream to an open sky And I am not content only to know To hear and see, and wade in the shallow You don’t understand why she’s still alive You know now, she should have died And I am not content to sit here and let them kill her But as you might have guessed she’s a fighter |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Why did you write three poems on here? Why did you not just start a new topic for each? Anyway they are all good poems. Keep writing. |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
wow. I really love these. Especially the last one. But yeah why didn't you put them all on separately? Anyway, good job, I'll look for your next ones. Jenni To hate you must first have loved. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Both of these were very good. I'm not really sure why you put 2 on the same page...but besides that...these poems were absolutely beatufiul. The word usage in the first one was perfect! And the second one came together so beautifully. But I think the first was my favorite. Sometimes we all need to escape. Somedays, it just seems like everyones conspiring against you...and you'd like to just give up...Either way...these poems are wonderful. I look forward to reading more of your work! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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