i try to change (repost from teen 4)

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i try to change (repost from teen 4)

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2003-04-28 11:19 PM

i try to change just for you.
but it doesn't work.
i said i would never change but i did.
my hair,my clothes,my style
i changed it all for you.

i promised my self i would never change,
but i did and it was all for you.
i use to be nothing.
now i am sumthing.
cus i changed.

i want to thank you.
you helped me change.
now i am a little short punk chic with attitude.
i'm aggressive.
i'm violent.
all because you i changed for you.

this is me now cus i have changed!
if you believed this your very gulliable.
cus i know i am who i am and i'll never change.
i am robin and that is who i will always be!

so don't try and change me
5 to the eye is what you'll get
cus i am me
and that's who i chose to be

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

[This message has been edited by punkrockerrobin (04-28-2003 11:20 PM).]

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

1 posted 2003-04-29 03:28 AM

ok i just thought i'd bring this one back i dunno but i did.
robin

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
cody saw some pigs so he tried to fly but he fell and went BOOM!

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

2 posted 2003-04-29 05:57 PM

My interpetation of this is, that if someone truely loves you, then they will take you as you are, and not force you to change. I like the message in this poem, because it is obviously well thought out.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

3 posted 2003-04-29 06:57 PM

it's often easier to change to accomodate somebody, but never good...they'll always find the real you eventually...nice work.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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