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Teen Poetry #6

When Ever I Speek

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

0 posted 2003-04-28 04:51 PM

When ever I speek
stupid comments come out!
What's happening
it used to be funny when I'd shout.

My once sly remarks
are now stpuid and uncool
What's wrong with me
I feel like such a fool

I used to be able
to crack people up so bad
but not now
geees I'm soo mad

Am I changing or what
Is my mind screwed up
Why do I feel stupid
even when i say "Sup"

What did I do
to deserve this
everyone says
Where's the old crystal we miss

So mainly i just sit there
and wish something more I could say
but I'll just make a fool of myself
and their will be prices to pay
Heh I wrote this cause (maybe as you noticed) it seems like everything that come outta my mouth anymore is totally worthless....I'll say something and then it's like uhhh yeah so what ya know...I used to be funny and out going...the one to come up with some smartalic, funny,rude, or sly remerk ya know...now it's all BLAHHHH

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

1 posted 2003-04-28 06:14 PM

Everyone deserves to be heard in one way or another. I haven't given you a deaf ear.

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
Unknown

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

2 posted 2003-04-29 04:34 PM

heh thanks...I used to be funny ya know and now it's like the real me is gone!

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

3 posted 2003-04-29 07:12 PM

hey crystal...It seem's like the person or identity that you've become as you grow has changed into something that your old friend are hesitant to accept. Maybe around them you should try to feel out which "you" they are more fond of and let it roll...hope it all works out...write me anytime if ya need to...

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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