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Son Vs. Stepfather
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Son Vs. Stepfather |
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sykopathicfreek Junior Member
since 2003-04-22
Posts 24ohio, usa |
I'll never let you scream at me I'll never let you kill I'll never let you hurt yourself never let you pop pills I'll never try to run I'll never try to hide never let you know what im feeling deep inside I will never hurt you I will never cry Never give you warning when I wanna die I'll Never lose my form I'll never be like you You'll never controll me No matter what you do You will never hurt ME YOU will never cry You will never LOVE me I can see it in your EYES He will never break me He will never lie He just wants to be accepted but HE always made me cry Finally Im out for good now never coming back I dont ever visit because your heart is black That doesnt mean I hate you I just hate your ways truthfully I really miss you and the better days You chose him over me like you've always done what should I have expected thats where you always run never asked me for help never seemed to care now you probably miss cause you have a room thats bare. "Pain is but weakness leaving the body" |
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Darkness Member
since 2002-10-17
Posts 202The place just beyond my eyes, where my spirit flies. |
Out of all the works you have done... This, by FAAAAAAAAARRRRR, is the best of the best. You have found your niche, when it comes to poetry. I am proud, I am happy for you, and I hope you keep this up. I don't know how you did it, this poem flowed like water running down K2. It was awesome,and you expressed you ideas very well. out of 10, I give it a 11! DaRkNeSs |
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blueyedlioness Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 289USA |
I TOTALLY agree! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
holy...this was AWESOME. I can so relate...o my, this is goin in my library and u totally got my vote. If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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