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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il 
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Jump There is an adventure awaiting me!! One of terror, and excitement! High into the great unknown I'll sore, where my fear will dissapear when I let myself go. Now falling, spinning, and screaming, my adrennalin is rushing. My heart's pounding and my palms sweating. Faster and faster falling, yet now growing less and less afraid. My fear now leaving as the rush sets in taking over body and mind. People are that of ants, and the ground but a scale model. If I were any closer only then would I be scared, cause then I'd be close enough to have a reason. In just an instant my fall has slowed to that of a feather, and I float back to solid ground. Now I'm no longer afraid, and I'll long for another...jump! |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
skydiving, huh...cool...if I didn't know any better, I'd say this was a metaphor. Had it been, it would have been a great one. But the vaguesness allows us to ponder that meaning. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hmmm well you can take this a few ways i guess. hmmm i dunno it was ok. i think this could realte to people taking a jump into life. or something else who knows. hehe anyways  good job!robin i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave! |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
I have often had dreams that I was falling, and, when I'd wake up, feeling as though I've slammed into my body. So I know how that feels. A good poem can reach out to everyone, and everyone knows what it is like to fall. ^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ |
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