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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2003-04-26 09:58 PM

Blind Love

The dry air of summer's night.
A dimly moonlight street.
Gentle joys of vulnerable hearts
in need of passions heat.
The hearts of gold in desparate search...
my heart is of that kind...
needing air of summer's night-
always beating blind.
Wasted kisses on all of those
who came to no avail.
Their love was wrong in leaving me
upon the midnight hail.
I search again in no direction,
blind to where I go.
Stopping not to see true love,
for that I do not know.

Jeremy D. Halstead

Keep in mind, I wrote this 6 years ago, I was barely 17... I learned a bunch since then. Love ya'll.

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

[This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (04-26-2003 10:02 PM).]

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-04-26 10:14 PM

The first line paints the picture perfectly from the start.
Very descriptive poem. I like this one alot.
Well done.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2003-04-27 04:36 AM

very nicely written. i liked it very well.
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

FlyingCloud
Member

since 2003-04-28

Posts 151
A little place inside my head

3 posted 2003-05-05 06:04 PM

Blind love is the best type of love there is.

+Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.+
T. S. Eliot (1888 - 1965)

Eminem wanna be
Member

since 2003-02-04

Posts 52
Windsor, Missouri

4 posted 2003-05-05 09:27 PM

and yet another deep picture perfect poem....what can i say...i gotta hand it to you jeremy.....ur the best

You can do anything you set your mind to man--EMIN3M
R.I.P.-Zandon R. Maddix 10-3-80 to 10-5-02

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2003-05-05 11:04 PM

extemely well written, I enjoyed it very much. Your were quite insightful, at 17. Nice job.
~LExy

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

6 posted 2003-05-06 01:11 AM

Whether it be in your teens or twenties or thirties, we are always learning the new joys and horrors that love can bring. And I believe that love truley is blind it doesn't stop to look before picking the person it just does then it sits back and watches what happens..in a little bit of a philisophical mood tonight sorry! Well written, 17 or Not!! Beautifully painted picture and well used emtion
~Live and Laugh~

Always strive for excellence never perfection.
~Bella~

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

7 posted 2003-05-06 01:55 PM

Ooooooh... I love that.

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