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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2003-04-25 04:27 PM

The walls close in around me,
as the colors fade to black.
I look around at what I see,
and what my life lacks.

Trying to comprehend,
how things turned out this way.
Wanting to put an end,
to my pitiful dismay.

Wondering how I got here,
how I got on this train,
thats headed toward fear,
and headed toward pain.

There is no way out,
and nothing is what it seems.
My whole life filled with doubt,
and only suffocating dreams.

this was written by myself and Megan (SilentTears)

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

[This message has been edited by Spine Grinder (04-25-2003 04:28 PM).]

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

1 posted 2003-04-25 06:44 PM

Great job guys! I really liked this and yes you have my vote! haha ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

2 posted 2003-04-26 04:07 PM

This deserves to be in the book. I hope it's not too late.

I vote.

ex animo,
Aaron Woodside

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-04-26 04:37 PM

As always, excellent poem.
You both did a wonderful job on it!
My vote for this one, I hope you get into the book!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

4 posted 2003-04-26 05:50 PM

this was really good! its got my vote!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

5 posted 2003-04-26 08:29 PM

This was really good, I especially liked the third stanza, great job guys.
~LEXY

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

6 posted 2003-04-27 07:59 PM

well, you both did good work. the vibe here reminds me of the remake of Psycho...I'll explain that another time if you'd like...nice work.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

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