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blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

0 posted 2003-04-25 12:34 PM

Hey, y'all! I'm new... just registered yesterday. This seems like an AWESOME place and I'm really looking forward to getting to know you guys. One thing, though... is there a general discussion area? Ya know, not just poetry? Hmm... okay.

Anyway, I wrote this a couple of weeks ago and thought it was interesting.

Of everything
I've ever dealt with
I have never felt
Like this

I always thought that
Life could be handled
Until life gave me
You to miss

Of everything
That's ever scared me
This is what scares me
Most of all

That I won't be
The one you come to
And I won't know to catch you
When you fall

That I'll never
Put my arms around you
Knowing that you love me, too
That I'll never
Wake up next to you

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

1 posted 2003-04-25 03:34 PM

Hi! Welcome to PiP.

At the top of your screen, there should be a little blue toolbar (upper left corner) and one of the options says "discussion" on it... if you click there, you can go to the general discussion areas of the forum. Hope this helps!

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

2 posted 2003-04-25 05:40 PM

Hey! first, i wanna say welcome to piptalk. this is a really great place to show your poetry and get to know others! I havent been here long either but i already love the place! i think your poem was great. cant wait to see more of your work
Bri

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

3 posted 2003-04-25 05:40 PM

Hey! first, i wanna say welcome to piptalk. this is a really great place to show your poetry and get to know others! I havent been here long either but i already love the place! i think your poem was great. cant wait to see more of your work
Bri

blueyedlioness
Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 289
USA

4 posted 2003-04-25 09:32 PM

*smacks forehead*

Of course, the discussion button... makes sense. Thanks.

And thanks for the welcome!

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2003-04-25 09:42 PM

You've chosen a great website for poetry! I'm sure you'll like it here.

Anyways, this is a GREAT poem! Maybe it's because I can relate to it. I really felt this, good job! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

6 posted 2003-04-26 02:45 PM

NEVER SAY NEVER!!!!..jk..lol..seriously, it's always good to keep hope for the future alive...I really liked the sense of revalation here rather than just sadness..good work...btw, welcome.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2003-04-26 04:53 PM

Welcome to pip!!
I hope you have a long enjoyable stay here!
I really really love this poem!!
Excellent first post, I think the 2nd stanza is my favorite!
Well done!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

8 posted 2003-04-27 04:44 AM

welcome welcome welcome!!! i hope you will like it here i have been here for a long time and have met a lot of kool people. i know you will to. great poem very well written.
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

9 posted 2003-04-27 08:44 PM

*Claps* Welcome aboard! I agree with Jeremy, Never say never. It's not cool. But I do know what you mean. This is great for your first post. Keep it up. I'm looking foward to reading more. Peace. ~*~Me~*~

I lie all the time - infact Im lieing right now!
Today is yesterdays tomorrow.

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