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Teen Poetry #6

Seriously(Read This!!!)

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2003-04-25 02:25 AM

I'm completly aware of the fact
that this forum is for poems.
I now will submit a poem for you.
I hope that you will listen.
A piece of power exists in our home,
it's has been overlooked
and left all alone.
I've read this great sentiment
and felt it's strong word.
I've been on that page
and known what he's heard.
The poem entitled "Happy Birthday Dad"
is a gem you should read,
trust me on that.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

teenpoet
Member

since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

1 posted 2003-04-30 02:38 PM

You got that. It's a great poem, everyone ought to read it. I don't know if anyone can write such a poem as that. It's really quite well done. my praises. Gotta Listen to Jeremy on this one.

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