Teen Poetry #6 |
Reality (very short) |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Reality is the acknowledgement of ones limitations. Depression is acceptance. I'm on my feet, I'm on the floor, I'm good to go |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
kev- i loved this one. short and sweet. sweet....like u. lol |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
hey kev, between this and your current away message I'm really worried... Great job though... ~Lee |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Hmm... I'm thinking that I disagree with the "depression is acceptance" part, as it was when I accepted my limitations that I was noticably freed from depression. It's different for everyone though I suppose. You okay? A toque IS a hat! And I have one! |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Awww....this is short sweet and to the point......I agree with Skyfire up there, you okay??? ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
I liked this very much and I have to agree with the sentiment of the poem actually, anyway well done Kevin! Anya |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I loved this, but completely disagree with it. Well done though, Kevin! I've always enjoyed your work. This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Wrong, wrong, wrong.... Reality is what is percieved. Depression is a filter to perception, therefore depression dictates reality. Acceptance is merely affirmation. Learn to place poetry before people |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
so quickly everyone does not agree with him, but depressions can differ... What someone feels can be a million times different then what another feels, its still depression...its still painful... ~Lisa |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Who are we to define? I think Kevin wrote something that has its own truth value. The reason why I disagree with it is because it can change quite frequently depending on the situation and the individual's mind. |
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