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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Trees sway gently While hearts are broken Birds sing sweetly While tears fall slowly Babies are born While grandparents die Young love blossoms While true love does reign Rain falls quickly While smiles brighten homes Storms rage outside While warmth spreads inside |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
I liked this! Short, sweet, and to the point. Poems don't have to be long to be good. Great write! ~Jess  "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
it's there truly a method to all of the madness...A fire burns within my soul while a fireman is crying. My baby born to find this earth while grandfather is slowly dying. loved the poem...good thought. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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