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Happy Place |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
I sit in my chair, dream without a care, I'm in my happy place, A place of peace, Of love and all things beautiful, flowers blooming, butterflies flying, I like it here, much more than home, Where the grass is dead, and im all alone, Alone in my room, I plan the destruction of the human race, They all hate me, they all hate me, But i don't care, I just sit and stare, I'm going to destroy them, One day, I will rule, The earth will be black, the sky grey, the grass dead, No more butterlfies, so sad, so sad, Now I'm in my happy place, I like it here, But without love, We may all have to go home. |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
I wanted to see what you guys think about this poem. I entered it into a contest and it started with about 300 ppl that i was against and now its down to me and 32 other ppl. my poem is going in a book and some poem cd thing and im so excited! i just wanted to see what you thought! hope you like it. |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Great imagery! Good good write! hehe ~Jess  "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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