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foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

0 posted 2003-04-22 10:05 PM

You don't care do you?
Now you have everyhing you have ever wanted.
But you will never have two of the things that used to matter most to you in life.
They are gone and now u must face it
They are never coming back.
You never really know how much you can miss something, until it's gone.
Well,it's gone.
In time what you replaced it for will also be gone.
I ask you this:
Then what will you do?

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2003-04-23 11:21 AM

I'm gonna take a guess and say that this is about your dad leaving....just a guess....I tend to be wrong sometimes. I was a well written poem either way...good job.

Jeremy

Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love.

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

2 posted 2003-04-25 08:08 PM

this was groovy man!!
what's it about, plz tell me , like i told you i cant comprehend all those words at the same time!!!
write more!!
`Samantha`

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

3 posted 2003-04-26 01:03 AM

This was really good! I havent talked to u in the longest time cause I`ve been so busy with choir and stupid crap. I hope to see ya at the soccer games this weekend and maybe call u if I get the chance. How`s life treating u. Not so hot here. Been lonely and overworked. Exhausted is prolly a better word. Well great job and keep it up.
*Allison*

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

4 posted 2003-06-22 12:21 PM

Good poem, awesome job. I like it a lot!

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

5 posted 2003-07-01 01:08 AM

hey,
this got back up here, kool!
well i just wanna say again that this poem is awesome.
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

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