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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il 
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Chains Heavy chain that I wear so proudly it seems. Constantly holding me back... holding me down. Every step I take gets harder! Every road I take seem longer. Longer than the last... I only have myself to blame. For it was by myself I've constructed this chain. Every link I've made with every decision that I make. Every decision a reflection a reflection of mistake! With every mistake I grow stronger, and my chain grows longer, and longer still. This is my burden my own personal hell. This chain I wear... I wear it well! Sing'n fool |
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BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
Wonderful write. I take it your into song writting? Any way, I love the example of the chain and the links being made by mistakes you've made. Plus you show that your able to live with them and from reading this, you do it very well indeed. I only found one typo and even it is minor. Again, wonderful write, I really enjoyed reading this. Read my work and read my thoughts |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
My gosh..I can't believe how much I can relate to your writing! Not only that, you have great talent! Good job! ~Jess  "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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