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Say what you want |
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Eminem wanna be Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 52Windsor, Missouri |
These are kinda mixed emotions i guess Say what you want cause i don't care I am who I am and that's plenty fair Don't discriminate me because I'm something you're not Who cares if I'm different and I don't fit your word "HOT" You get the guys I get very few but I'm jsut more of a friend a better friend than you I'm a tomboy, an outcast a wanna be, a punk so what about that at least i get though school and don't flunk I'm a biker, a blader a boarder "WOOOOOO WHO!" I'm better at them better than you! so as you see you're not all that neither am I but there's still stuff I'm great at! this is jus like so messed up or something...i've been on writers block for sooooo long...uhhh this stinks... ~Crystal |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il |
no this doesn't stink! I think this is good. Who cares what people think!! so what if your not what oter people want you to be. you're you, and that's good enough. If people can't see me for who I am then in my mind they're not good enought to be my friend!! good wright. Sing'n fool |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
despite the lack of stereotypical poetic "value" here, it's still has a good sence of that other intangible...the X factor in writing...emotion. That makes the whole piece worth the time to read it and more...I liked it because of the insight of yourself that it gave to me and others...good stuff. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. [This message has been edited by Jeremy Halstead (04-22-2003 03:56 AM).] |
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Eminem wanna be Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 52Windsor, Missouri |
hey thanks guys....i can write better but my mind is ssssoooooooo offf track! |
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