True Love Does Not Exist Here

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Teen Poetry #6

True Love Does Not Exist Here

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

0 posted 2003-04-21 07:15 PM

How could I love you
When your love is forced upon me?
How could I love you from my heart
When I never truely did from the start
Please tell me how to do this
How can I take your kiss
When I dont truely love you at all
Don't make me drop my knees and fall
Don't make me plead
I need to be free
Dont force your love upon me
Listening, that is the key
For me and you are no more
No more of you forcing me to love you
Its time for me to open the door
The door that leads me to do what I want to do
Lets me be
When you open your eyes then you can see
I want out, I want to be free
No more transparent love
Between you and me.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

1 posted 2003-04-21 07:25 PM

I really like the feeling in this poem. Nice write, very nice!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2003-04-22 02:54 AM

omg i just wrote a poem that sounds like that wow!
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

sing'n fool
Member

since 2003-04-17

Posts 82
Morris, Il

3 posted 2003-04-22 11:36 AM

very nice! beautiful write infact. no one likes to have anything forced upon them. that is even more true when it comes to matters of the heart. Love can push us away sometimes. good job

sing'n fool

Be yourself. Say what you feel. Nothing is wrong. To your own self be real!!

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