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Why Unknown?
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Why Unknown? |
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karebear07 Member
since 2003-04-15
Posts 64Texas |
I walk down the road and the golden sun shines down on me. I see my shadow overcoming infront of me. I'm wondering, walking toward the distant haze so I can see everything. The colors all around are so hidden but I can see them as they fade away. The dew is thick tonight covering me as I run trying to get closer to the hardcore life. I wanna know whats hidden in my dreams. I want to know why the forgotton is never remembered again. Crisp cold air brushes my face and the sun is shining down as I try to fiqure this out. The flag sways in the wind and the sun glints off. The freedom I feel is so overwhelming. With out it I wouldn't be able to figure out the unknown that crawls around. -Kara <>< |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
This is a very moving poem. I really enjoyed reading this! Nice write! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
once again, I applaud your talent, and once again you surprise me with your poetry. great job kara! you will go far! Love you Bri |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
dreams do come and dreams do go. the light at the end of this tunnel comes with the knowledge that all dreams worth being discovered...will be. Liked the sence peaceful longing here...very enjoyable. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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