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another one about ronnie |
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Eminem wanna be Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 52Windsor, Missouri |
It's been a month now since you last left for war. It seems like ages since I last shut your door. There are so many memories that I remember of me and you. Like the things we said and went through. You've left me now all by myself; alone. I have no one to talk to so my body feels thrown. The memories are still here luckily never forgotten yet I'll remember them all back to the night we first met.... I was mad cause you were 20 and you didnt think I was 12 I was alone in liking you no one else but myself Then we met up again later about a week or two You talked to me and i talked to you We talked about brandon my first real love then what was going on with him and then there nothing else i could think of We started hangin out then we went down to the creek once with matt and even did tricks on our bikes together and that was pretty phat then one day my parents got into a fight and it was to u i ran to make everything right we sat in your house watching funny car races on tv "You want to go to the creek?" "Are you talkin to me?" We went down there only to swim but we got in Ronnie's car things went a lil too far "GEEES I ALMOST SCREWED HIM!" Then he's like "Why not?" and i was like "Cause it's not right" "Ok this won't happen again" and hopefully there's no "MIGHT" We drove off in his car taking backroads instead of main I ask myself "What were you thinking, are you INSANE!"....... A few months later he won't talk to me theres a big withdraw What do I do? Oh geee "NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS I'LL STILL BE YOUR FRIEND" He lied to me cause it ain't true what he said........ It's been a month now since you last left for war. It seems like ages since I last shut your door. i dont know what the first and last stanzas have to do with it but it all came to me so i just wrote it sorry it's about another GUY.....that's just my main problems right now....heh....thanz for reading it guys |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
the indepthness of the story and the flow were great but I was a little confused. Who's the other guy...there was that other fella you called "you" and there was also Ronnie...maybe I'm just to tired to get it right now. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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Eminem wanna be Member
since 2003-02-04
Posts 52Windsor, Missouri |
I dunno either....my writings always confusing sometimes....i'm just lost i guess |
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