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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
As I look to the crowd, I see you and only you, My eyes are fixated, Almost hypnotized, To the point of delerium, Rain starts falling, Everyone but you moves, Together we stand, You finally see me, Know me through my eyes, Under the cold sky, Our lips gently touch, Indescribable feeling, Love at first site. "The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept." |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
ooooooohh....nifty...you took and event that lasted only 5 seconds and brought out a sweet, warm story from it.... nice job. Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H. |
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