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No Street Sign
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No Street Sign |
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sing'n fool Member
since 2003-04-17
Posts 82Morris, Il 
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No Street Sign No landmark familiar, no street sign to help, a road leads to nowhere... I'm hear by myself. How did I get here? How will I return? I'm starting from nowhere! Which way do I turn?! Alone in the darkness, I struggle to find where I am going? I'm loosing my mind! So scared, and so frightened to face this alone... I fear I may never find my way home. M.P.D. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I like this one. You had really good use of the metaphor. Nice write! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh, no worries, we're never alone.  Good job. Jenn "Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me." |
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Peacebri Junior Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 44 |
Great job on this poem! I love the rhyming it has and the thought that was put into it! I cant wait to see your other work! |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
we all feel lost sometime. We all feel alone, and scared. I think this was a good poem. Are faith in others, and ourself are our street signs. J.D.H. |
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