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dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

0 posted 2003-03-16 10:24 PM

three there should be,
but one there is
only four but shown so much pain
treated me so good,
maybe cuz i lived and he wasnt lonely anymore,
he didnt wanna lose me too
o, how so quickly he grew
never really had a childhood,
always doing everything he could
did he really feel ignored?
or maybe he was just bored
crib death, premature
will there ever be a cure?
my big brother is so mature

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

[This message has been edited by dinky (03-16-2003 10:43 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-17 01:56 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Samantha, this is very heartwrenching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your tears and I send warm angel hugs out to you and your big brother, this is very sincere and heartfelt, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Samantha, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2003-03-17 04:32 PM

I feel your pain sam. My mom lost a child also. I had written a bunch more stuff but my mom was bein gay and scared me so I accidentally deleted it all. So who cares about her. Sometimes I wish it was me that she lost! ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Anyway. My older sibling died in the womb and was only as big as the first joint of your thumb.They couldnt tell if it was a boy or girl. I know jim was sposed to have a twin if I`m correct. I`m rly srry and give your mommy a hug.
*Allison*

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

3 posted 2003-03-17 10:56 PM

hey,
thx u guyz, u make me feel so much bettter!
my bro wasnt sposed to have a twin but my other bro was
thx for replyin
and allison i'm sry that ur mommy lost a baby too.
~sam~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

4 posted 2003-03-19 01:28 PM

Hey Sam,

This was really good. I really feel for you because I also lost a sister. She only lived two hours. It hurts too because everytime I tell someone what her name was they laugh. Ruth - Ann yea go ahead and laugh

but I liked this Sam

Cathy

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

5 posted 2003-04-15 08:38 PM

dinky,this is so sad I had a son to die he was 28days old good luck in your poetry

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

6 posted 2003-04-22 03:19 AM

Oh how sad....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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