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Teen Poetry #6

Dream Warning

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

0 posted 2003-04-19 04:33 PM

As i sit here, reflecting on my life,
my soul won't flow with the sweet music
i wish i heard.
Something is empty.
I feel so blessed, yet scarcely grateful.
The fog stops my breath short
making me cry in failure,
for now that distant goal is obscure.
My eyes see the faint sunlight through
the water, but my muscles don't respond.
Please, let me wake,
to realize that my dream
of dreams so far, so unreachable,
is not true,
only a warning.

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

[This message has been edited by StephyBob07 (04-19-2003 04:34 PM).]

karebear07
Member

since 2003-04-15

Posts 64
Texas

1 posted 2003-04-19 04:36 PM

Your soul will find that music. My sould somtimes loses that music and i get so fustrated but i remain to have faith. Keep it going and never lose it. You will find it. love ya-Kara <><

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-04-19 08:05 PM

This is beautiful!!! Absolutely wonderful! Oh my, I can relate to this poem. Your word usage was perfect! Too bad you didn't consider it for the book, this one would have made it! Nice write! I love it!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

3 posted 2003-04-20 02:00 PM

Im so glad you finally understand poetry Stephanie. Glad to have you here at Piptalk. Glad you write poetry now too cuz you clearly have a hidden talent that should be realeased and has been finally! keep writing, i look forward to reading them!

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

4 posted 2003-04-20 04:14 PM

hey, how do u get ur poems in the book? i wuz just wonderin. ~stephy

Peacebri
Junior Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 44

5 posted 2003-04-21 04:50 PM

there is a box to check when you put in a poem. it says, something like, Be considered for Passion's next book. just check it and your considered and ppl vote for you!

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