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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
not my best work: never mind you never mind i'll walk away get away from it all never mind that i once loved you never mind that you hurt me but i'll be ok it'll be all right but i won't take your beatings no more (reminder: i am not in an abusive relationship) |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
Hmm...not bad. I really like the theme of the poem...Good job! As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
I like it. I think that not capitalizing anything, such as "I" adds to the poem. Good write. Jenni You are what you make yourself to be. |
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tornskirt Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 87 |
brokendreams, thanks for the comments, i really appreciate them! never leave the light on if you don't want to be found |
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