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Teen Poetry #6

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peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-04-18 08:06 PM

Self infliction,
Keeps reappearing,
Troubling my thoughts,
Cutting my wounds,
Bringing me down...
Ever so quickly,
I've never been so lost in my self,
Struggling to break through,
Waiting for the moment of liberation,
When I can finally say...
"I love myself."

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

1 posted 2003-04-18 08:20 PM

I really liked that poem, Made me think about who I was and if I had freed myself yet, Very nice.

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2003-04-18 08:30 PM

I love this poem!!
It expresses the emotions very well!
I especially love the line, "I've never been so lost in myself."
And the last line ends the poem perfectly.
Great Job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

StephyBob07
Junior Member

since 2003-04-18

Posts 37
Texas

3 posted 2003-04-18 08:43 PM

this poem is wonderful! i can relate to it as well. keep writing! ~Stephy

Dreaming is the best thing you can do.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-04-18 09:07 PM

This is soooo good! Your word usage was perfect! I really like this one! I would vote for it, but I can't! Anyway, excellent write!

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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