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Teen Poetry #6

Naive

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-04-15 01:41 AM

The sweet teenage dream
filled with long forgotten
and hazy memories
as a young child
life didn't begin until now

So innnocent this youth
thinking themselves to be invinsible
sadly they will learn
that that fact is not so

I draw myself away
from the fact i am still young
I look at life in the bigger picture
objectively
to save myself from harm

Most youth believes
they they know everything
possesing the knowledge
they have long to discover
some learn lifes lesson
the hard way

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-04-15 03:11 AM

it's a fine line indeed.

I like the introspective then reflective pace of this.

Nice work Swan.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

2 posted 2003-04-20 09:30 AM

This is a very neat poem. Being 16 myself...I can relate. And yes, I do think I know everything sometimes, haha. But, I still know I have a lot to learn. I enjoyed this. Nice work.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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