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SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

0 posted 2003-04-13 01:51 PM

As I sit and write,
My silent tears soaking the crisp pages,
I cannot seem to grasp onto anything that would help keep my sanity.
I want to scream,
I want to cry,
I want to simply stop this bitter feeling of lonliness.
Constantly replaying your words in my head,
Over and over again.
My body shakes,
And I cannot comprehend.
What could I have possibly done,
To create such a feeling of hatred?
You have taken my fragile heart,
And broken it into a thousand pieces.
Aware of the heartache I've suffered before,
And you still do not take that into consideration.
Pushing aside my feelins and emotions.
You thrive in your own hipocrisy,
Dwell in my heartache,
And drown in my tears.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

[This message has been edited by SilentTears (04-13-2003 07:33 PM).]

BabieDoll
Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 268
BFE

1 posted 2003-04-13 03:37 PM

I love this poem SO SO much girlie! I'm glad you took my advice and posted it. But...in my binder I have this poem as 'Untitled'...do you want me to change it? But seriously, this is one of your best poems. You should submit more!

I love ya hun!

~J.Lynn

"In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..."

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

2 posted 2003-04-13 04:56 PM

I really liked this poem..I can relate to this very well at the moment. keep up the good work.

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2003-04-13 06:06 PM

Good job homie! I'm glad you posted even though you needed a little encouragement! Anyways, I can relate to this..well some parts! Keep writing! ~Jess

"The reason I talk to myself is that I'm the only one whose answers I accept."

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

4 posted 2003-04-14 12:56 PM

I liked this. Keep it up and add one to your vote total.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2003-04-14 10:08 AM

I do this too. I play things over and over in my head, and funny thing, I never come up with an answer...

I could relate to this, obviously.

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