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Riley 
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain 
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silence the most deadly thing know to man kind alone bleep bleep microphones tell a story through the sultry voice which flows from her lips slowly...so slowly her voice starts to fly taken onto the wind it carries across the vast fields filled with hopeful faces up and down up and up and down down down the voice goes in and out of chorus and verse scales float from forth her vocals the peak of the song her voice rings then silence again the voictreous* silence then one clap another and another soon the room filled with excitment chills run down the young girls spine the sweat doesn't seem to matter all that might be is that applause enough her bow last and only bow * =sp? ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ [This message has been edited by Riley (10-05-2002 10:44 PM).] |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Bravo! This is narrated with untouchable talent. You drew a very intricate image in my head. I like the brevity of the title, it compelled me to read... and the poem really delivered. Absolutely wonderful work, Riley. This has got to be one of my favourites from you. I love it.  Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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Riley
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain |
Parasite: Thank you very much.......I don't know where this came from I just started to write......Thanks again! Ri ~* Love humiliates you, hatered cradles you-White Olender *~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A very interesting read, wrote extremely well and something that I'd want to read again and again, thanks for sharing  Andrew Always and forever |
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