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0 posted 2003-04-10 06:42 AM


you see it in her eyes.
you hear it in hear voice.
that desperate cry.

she longs for you to hold her.
she needs you to make her feel loved.
she needs you to make her feel wanted.

she needs you.
the love you gave her is gone.
you hurt her.

why didn't youlove her?
why didn't you want her?
didn't you hear her?
didn't you want her?

her heart is cold now.
she cannot love again.
because of you!

your cold heart,
that saw it in her eyes.
your cold heart,
that heard it in her voice.

i hope you are happy with what you have done.
you tore her soul apart.
turned her heat cold.

i pray you see that you were wrong.
with the 4 harsh words you said you her....
I DON'T LOVE YOU.

because of you!
she cannot love again.
because of you!
her heart is cold
because of you!


because of you!


i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

[This message has been edited by punkrockerrobin (04-10-2003 06:44 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-04-10 06:45 AM


*evil grin* was i missed in teen poetry? and where is my cherry? i misses my cherish!!!!

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

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2 posted 2003-04-10 11:49 AM


Great Writing Robin, Nice to see you back
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3 posted 2003-04-11 12:26 PM


omg it's drew!!!!! and he didn't pick apart my poem. lol tks drew!

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

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4 posted 2003-04-12 03:58 AM


ROFL

Robin hon you know how I feel about this... and I'm sorry

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