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Teen Poetry #6

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peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

0 posted 2003-04-09 07:44 PM

I love a lie,
Surreal and hidden,
Beneath the surface,
You hide yourself,
Scared and heartbroken,
Vicious loneliness has finally caught you,
Trapped and won't let go.

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2003-04-09 08:50 PM

first to post first to post hehe i liked this, and ur choice of words. this was good jess, good job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

LuckyFelix
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 34
Here.

2 posted 2003-04-09 09:12 PM

Whoa, I like this quiet a bit. It hits home...Kinda. Nice.

Ego animus expungo - Me

[This message has been edited by LuckyFelix (04-09-2003 09:12 PM).]

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

3 posted 2003-04-09 10:24 PM

wow. a few words say a lot.
Jenni

You are what you make yourself to be.

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

4 posted 2003-04-13 07:50 PM

Wow...very good write! Sometimes a few sentences can say it better than an entire book. Hehe. Good write! Loves...

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

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