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aaron woodside
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0 posted 2003-04-09 05:07 PM



Here's number two.  I only got three in the last few months, so bear with me.

My Lady

One, Two, Three, and Four
petals on her clover
the luck of the irish begone
I've held her near before
and up and down
we spin around; dancing
irish tunes and drinking Jack
Luck has always smiled at me
and now I'm smiling back.



ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

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1 posted 2003-04-09 07:12 PM


Nice lighthearted poem.
I really enjoyed the read.
All these 0's next poems are disturbing me!

WinterWren
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2 posted 2003-04-10 01:21 PM


I loved this, so light hearted and lyrical, it was a pleasure to read

Andrew

aaron woodside
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3 posted 2003-04-10 05:43 PM


Thnx guys.  

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

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