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Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-04-09 02:31 AM

Once again I traveled home
and again I went to sleep
Asking why must I be so all alone
feeling this pain of love so deep

Last night as clouds drew high
I lay awake and wondered why
Why do reasons however true
refuse my need to be with you

In my dreams I reached for you
to find an empty side
Like my bed my life a void
and in my heart I died

When at night I travel home
my heart begins to weep
My destination loneliness
my love for you so deep

I know four seasons are not so long
a year is all they make
Yet to live them without you beside me
may be more than I can take

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-04-12 04:33 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Matt, this is such a sensitive love poem, sweet friend, I send hugs your way in hope this special love always shines in your heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2003-04-12 06:38 PM

That was such a sweet poem...it really touched me...You seem to have a beautiful and loving heart!!!! There should be more guys out there as sweet as you!!!!Keep writing from the heart!!!
Jenn

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

3 posted 2003-04-12 10:17 PM

Matt, this is so sweet very good you sure got my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Paragon
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 114

4 posted 2003-04-12 11:49 PM

Man, this is one heartfelt poem...
I have to say I had to look back and make sure I hadn't somehow blacked out and wrote this because I know EXACTLY that feeling.
Your short poem spoke volumes.. it's everything one should expect from a poem
A clear and concise point or "theme" with crisp images and good grammar.

Thanks for the read,
Steven

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

5 posted 2003-04-13 12:35 PM

Very sad. I know what you mean with this.

Add one to your vote total.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

6 posted 2003-04-20 12:31 PM

This is a beautiful poem. You have my vote...

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

A.L
Member

since 2003-03-15

Posts 131

7 posted 2003-04-20 06:11 PM

this was such a sweet poem, i like the way you worded everything...keep on writing

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

8 posted 2003-04-20 10:56 PM

you've got it bad man...evokes some pretty somber memories of my own. nice job projecting the feel.

J.H.

Curse not upon love, for it is the greatest of great things. Be it not love that curses you....but thy lack thereof. -J.D.H.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

9 posted 2003-04-20 11:08 PM

I know it was more than I could take.... *looks up* Oh?! Is this thing on?! *sweatdrops* This is a very deep love poem you've got here... it's obvious how much you care. I know how you feel too, man... it sucks, but with that much love, you'll find a way. You just have to have faith in you're love. If you have that, it'll all work out.

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

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