You gave me a life, thats suppose to be

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Teen Poetry #6

You gave me a life, thats suppose to be

leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

0 posted 2003-04-09 12:28 PM

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I am blind,
No longer can see.
You gave me a life,
Thats suppose to be.

I set out my hand,
as you did yours.

I set My love free,
Into your pors.

I told you
You were perfect,
You can't deny.

You lifted the rock,
That I lay beneath.

YOu gave me a life
Thats suppose to be.

When someone tears me down,
You bring me back up.

I lifted my head,
That i struggle to hold high.

I will promise you,
I will never say goodbye...

Ashgiel

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

1 posted 2003-04-09 01:40 AM

this poem was grate it was writen well and has a lot to say
thanks for the read

EllinneT
Junior Member

since 2003-04-04

Posts 12

2 posted 2003-04-10 12:44 PM

hey good job that was very good writing
you write awesome poems so when are you going to teach me how to try and get my poem published? talk to ya lata

luv ya babe

EllinneT

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2003-04-10 01:01 PM

A wonderful poem

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-04-10 08:34 PM

(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your wonderful words do! (big hugggssssss) May your life always be aflame in joy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!