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WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

0 posted 2003-04-08 06:42 PM

Please don't suffer this way,
I can't stand to see your pain.
I can feel it in the air,
Even from a distance
Though you don't want me to know
Of it's existence.
Be Strong.
Take the support of my warmth,
I'd give you much more if I could
But Im so helpless in the face of this consuming darkness.
My love isn't enough
To make you well.
Remain Brave.
Little by little,
You're being taken away.
You make this world so much brighter,
Don't let your light fade away.
Keep that Hope in your eyes
It may be the difference
That lets you beat this darkness.

To all those fighting cancer,
And to those who can do little to help.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

aaron woodside
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

1 posted 2003-04-09 04:29 PM

I liked this hun.  I personally don't know anyone with cancer but I can imagine the pain it brings to their family and friends.

I also know just having this feeling in general for someone is tough.

Good write.  Glad to see your still here.

ex animo,
Aaron

IN NOMINE PATRI ET FILII ET SPIRITUS SANCTI

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

2 posted 2003-04-09 04:45 PM

wow. I liked this, it hit home. good job.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

3 posted 2003-04-09 05:44 PM

I liked this one alot..it really hit close to home with me. Keep up the good work

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

4 posted 2003-04-10 03:03 PM

I think this is one that hit home to many people and you wrote it very well

~*~Karen~*~

~Dream like you'll live forever,live like you'll die tomorrow~

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

5 posted 2003-04-10 05:09 PM

Good write. I liked it a lot. ~Jess

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

Scandalous
New Member

since 2003-04-10

Posts 9

6 posted 2003-04-10 05:26 PM

wow... i can really relate with you on this, i really liked this a lot... very strong... nice job!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

7 posted 2003-04-10 05:41 PM

Thank you all soo much for your warm replies, you don't know how much they are appreciated!
Im glad that alot of you can relate and know where Im coming from with this one.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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