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Teen Poetry #6

black and blue

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-04-07 10:50 PM

You slither beneath the layers of black and blue cold.
When our faces are still lite by the fire.
And we're tucked away, safe and warm.
Your feet tap softly along the floor.
You leave for another day, spent away,
And I'm alone again.

You leave again, to ride along in union with the rising sun.
Your eyes stay turned away to all we have become.
Covered scarcely by nights shaddow,
I attempt to hide the stains colored across my face.
The obvious pain, I've tryed so hard to change.

You come to me between the shadows and the light.
Through the constant murmur, its easy to hide the truth, to live a lie.
But I can't stand the feeling of you leaving, the warmth leaves my body,
and I shiver beneath this blanket of black and blue cold.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-04-08 06:58 PM

My vote for this one,
I like alot of your work and this one is no exception.
My favorite line, "Your eyes stay turned away to all we have become."
Wow.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

2 posted 2003-04-12 03:26 PM

Very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-12 03:40 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Lexy, I don't like that feeling too and I send angel hugs your way for warmth to again fill your heart soon! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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