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Trouble Breathing
Member

since 2002-11-12

Posts 63

0 posted 2003-04-07 04:20 AM

I look into your eyes,
And I can see,
The inner-child that used to be,

Once upon a time,
It seems to me,
You had so much fun,
And so little from which to hide,

In the time, when fun was number one,
There was always a part of you,
That wished you’d always stay young

We grow up to fast,
And how the days fly past,
And of it all, I’d get rid
For just one more day as a kid

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2003-04-07 09:45 AM

ahh its great beaing a kid.. im 19 so i still know what its like.. i say your a kid until you turn 30, but thats justme. this peom would do well to be in the book.. you got my vote.

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-04-07 09:59 AM

Oh how I wish I could be a kid again. It was so simple then. Its funny, someone whose 19 said he still feels like a kid, and I'm 15 and I don't feel like I've been "a kid" since I was about 10. Cuz after that life got really complicated. sigh. Good write, it has my vote.
Jennifer

You are what you make yourself to be.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-07 07:52 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is very heartfelt, dearest friend, I too wish I could live another boyhood because I suffered from abuse growing up and now I am 19 and hold the spirit of the boy in my heart but still feel sad sometimes regretting all that is done! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, know the spirit of the child will always be in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

frolicking dolphin
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 268
my own special world

4 posted 2003-04-08 02:43 PM

I am 15 and also feel like I've already lost my childhood, I think it happened when I went to high school because of all the pressure, very nice poem, I really enjoyed it

Karen

[This message has been edited by frolicking dolphin (04-08-2003 02:44 PM).]

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