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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-04-06 09:55 PM



i sit
in my room
computer on
tv on
emotions off
thoughs flowing
writers block
got to flock
to my place
look at the face
one i love
like a dove
flies away
i cry today
i need to fly away


(callme)

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BrokenDreams
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since 2003-02-09
Posts 425
In The Clouds
1 posted 2003-04-06 10:07 PM


I've often been like that myself. very good write. you really remind me of someone i know...its kinda creepy...lol
Jenni

[This message has been edited by BrokenDreams (04-06-2003 10:12 PM).]

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Beneath the northern stars
2 posted 2003-04-06 10:10 PM


I know what it's like....I've had moments like those too.

~Liz

Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you..
~Mr. Big

Albino_Jenn
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since 2003-03-03
Posts 105
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2003-04-07 05:25 PM


Good write..I feel for you..I hope it all works out for you...keep the faith and hope alive...Live life to the fullest and keep writing...
Jenn

**It's better to be hated for who you are, than loved for who you are not**

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