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Petey
Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2003-04-02 11:00 PM


Other Side

A hopeless romantic,
who doesn't know what romance is,
No girls give him any chances.
This hopeless romantic
Is searching for love
But he can't find any,
No way he can think of,
This romantic is me.
I think I've hit the last straw,
I don't think I can take anymore...

I'm telling you know,
And I'm telling you sure,
I've never felt like this before.
I couldn't tell you,
What this life is for.
These are the last words I leave for you.
I'll be gone from now until forever,
Tell Dad I'm sorry I wrecked the car.
Tell Mom that I love her,
Tell her I won't be far.
Tell Bro I never meant to make him cry.
Tell them all I'll see them on the other side.

I don't know why they
Sit in the stall and smoke.
They knock of another person
Just for another toke.
But I know
They don't like what they're doing.
And I know
They don't like where their life is going.
And I hang out with them,
Wondering where I should be.
It doesn't take long before it comes to me.

I'm telling you know,
And I'm telling you sure,
I've never felt like this before.
I couldn't tell you,
What this life is for.
These are the last words I leave for you.
I'll be gone from now until forever,
Tell Dad I'm sorry I wrecked the car.
Tell Mom that I love her,
Tell her I won't be far.
Tell Bro I never meant to make him cry.
Tell them all I'll see them on the other side.

I feel my hope is gone.
No I think all I do will go wrong.
There is no light at the end of the tunnel.
In my life there is no sweet song.
All I want to do now is leave.
What I must do is clear to me...

I'm telling you know,
And I'm telling you sure,
I've never felt like this before.
I couldn't tell you,
What this life is for.
These are the last words I leave for you.
I'll be gone from now until forever,
Tell Dad I'm sorry I wrecked the car.
Tell Mom that I love her,
Tell her I won't be far.
Tell Bro I never meant to make him cry.
Tell them all I'll see them on the other side.

(Accoustic Solo)

I'm telling you know,
And I'm telling you sure,
I've never felt like this before.
I couldn't tell you,
What this life is for.
These are the last words I leave for you.
I'll be gone from now until forever,
Tell Dad I'm sorry I wrecked the car.
Tell Mom that I love her,
Tell her I won't be far.
Tell Bro I never meant to make him cry.
Tell them all I'll see them on the other side.
-Petey

© Copyright 2003 Petey - All Rights Reserved
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since 2003-01-03
Posts 696
washington, USA
1 posted 2003-04-03 09:01 PM


Emotional and strong..I'm beyond words to portray how I feel, an almost non-existant thing for me to be. It has a horrible beauty that steals the breath away..
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

Petey
Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27
Idaho, USA
2 posted 2003-04-07 09:13 AM


Thank you.   Was it really all that great?
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