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tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

0 posted 2003-04-05 10:37 PM

i am not brave
he said i was
i'm not
i cry
ir un
i have nothing to say
i want to be happy again
but i can't stop crying
and i can only hug myself
and i want a kiss
god, is there bliss
how can i hurt this much
and not be dead
how can i cry this
many tears?
how can i need so much
how can i love so strong?
how can i need you this much
how could she leave me
how can i get him to see
how?
he said i was brave
i'm not...
he lied...
and all i can do now...
is cry

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2003-04-06 09:51 PM

Welcome to pip!!!
I really like this poem.
Especially the line, "how can I hurt this much and not be dead?"
Great job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

BrokenDreams
Member

since 2003-02-09

Posts 425
In The Clouds

2 posted 2003-04-06 10:20 PM

good job with the poem and I hope you life looks up for ya soon.
Jenni

You are what you make yourself to be.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-04-07 07:46 PM

(big hugggsssssss) I think that was selfish for him to do, perhaps you really are brave but that's no excuse to turn away and certainly that indicates he is far less brave than you for not sympathizing with your needs! (sad sigh) Don't let him get you down, he is obviously a coward, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

4 posted 2003-04-07 10:34 PM

"i want to be happy again,
but I can't stop crying,
and I can only hug myself,
and I want a kiss,
oh god, is there bliss?"
I loved that part, th whole thing really, I loved the realism of, you can tell that it comes straight from the heart,
"how can I hurt this bad and not be dead."
I used to wonder that myself...
This one hits homwe, thanks for sharing.

Lexy

carol
Senior Member

since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

5 posted 2003-04-12 07:12 PM

Good write but sad

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

6 posted 2003-04-16 07:47 PM

yeah, i guess it is a sad poem... a lot of stuff was going on, things are great now... only, i hide a lot of stuff... you know?

SilentTears
Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 371
Lost and Broken

7 posted 2003-04-19 08:18 PM

Yes...I know. I hide a lot of things too. Sometimes, you can't help but to hide things. But wonderful poem anyhow!!! It was beautiful. Nice write.

As I smile at everyone else, I'm dying inside... ~Me

tornskirt
Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 87

8 posted 2003-04-19 09:08 PM

some of my poetry is in "dark poetry" so if you like what you see, check those out!

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

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