»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #6
»
Everlasting Love
| Teen Poetry #6 |
|
Everlasting Love |
|
|
SweetGhettoFlurt Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 15Milw,WI |
Oh baby you would never believe how much i love you, This relationship and love wit you is way to good to be true, I am so happy that we are finally together, I know from my heart that we'll be together 4ever, No matter wut i say u always seem to understand, When i'm with you its like i'm in a dreamland, I promise you i'll never do anything wrong, I want to be wit u for oh so long, Everytime i look into your eyes, I know that you'll never tell me any liez, You will always be my 1 tru luv, Even when i am way up above, Friends may talk in jealous chatter, But we both know their talk really doesnt matter, I will always love u even when i am gone, I want you to remember me but still go on, I am so glad u will always be mine, I promise you all of my time, If u are goin thru a hard time and u need to talk, I will hold ur hand and wit u i will walk, Finishing this poem u were my 1 inspiration, My luv 4 u was also a temptation, Before you may have had no clue, But now you know that i will always love you! |
||
| © Copyright 2003 *~*Marie*~* - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Star T Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 182Philadelphia, US |
for love's sake and for the sake of ur faith in love,i truly hope this love u feel lasts forever.just hold on to it and never let it go.i loved the poem loads cos i feel u perfectly cos i also know what it feels like to be inlove. |
||
*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
This poem was very sweet, ain't love great? One thing I will recomend though is to change the spelling mistakes I know that a lot of them were probably on purpose EX: Liez, wit, luv But it was actually more distracting from the poem rather than benificail. Overall I really enjoyed the read, excellent first post, I hope to hear lots more from you..welcome to pip! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marie~ Welcome to Passions! This was a wonderful first post, and I enjoyed the read. I look forward to seeing lots more from you.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
