Teen Poetry #6 |
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2gd4uand2gd2beat Junior Member
since 2003-04-01
Posts 10 |
Out deep in the forest, where I thought I could hide. Friends and family I though I could abide. Down deep in my arms is where I hide my face, Because I know I'm lost, and cannot find my place. Looking at the mountains and the sea, I know that's the place to be. Looking out where I live today, On the court is where I play. I shall not hide nor cry, This thing will help me get by. This darkness is my life, My family, like a knife. Look at me, standing here, Waiting for my friends to re~appear. Thanks to them I can live my dream, Shining like stars as a nice light beam. |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
*clap"* I really liked this one I'm just kickin it up |
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leighsa Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 74Oregon, United States Of America |
This is a good write.. Welcome to passions, i hope to hear more of your poetry.. Ashgiel |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Wonderfull meaning behind this one. Nicely done! ~Live and Laugh~ People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today. |
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