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Teen Poetry #6

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Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-04-01 03:29 PM

No more love
In my life
Its been filled
With constant strife

No more good words
That I can say
And I no longer
Enjoy my day

I hide myself
Inside my mind
There’s no more
For me to find

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2003-04-01 05:24 PM

Hello,
I liked this one

Full of goodness

I'm just kickin it up

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-04-01 09:31 PM

Short and simple yet with a strong message and filled with emotion, herd to do in a short poem and you did it well. Nice job!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2003-04-02 09:37 PM

like your previous reply..short and simple. i like this one, i think maybe because i can really relate to it..but seriously though, good write! ~Jess

"Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

4 posted 2003-04-03 11:01 PM

hey this was nice but a little sad.however,i feel u forreal! take heart my friend,things will be better in the morning.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

5 posted 2003-04-04 07:37 PM

heartfelt poem! I really love this one,
Great job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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