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Teen Poetry #6

angels kisses

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-03-31 09:00 PM

I need love,
I want something more than,
the constant strain of the passing days.
I want love, more than ever,
to feel the warmth of geniueity,
to hear the music of our skin,
let the gentle melody of love rush in.
The perfection of a smile,
the tender chills you create.
The warmth of finger tips,
and the many lines they trace.
The satisfying moisture of of your lips..
Give me all of this,
before I drown between the crashing waves,
of these indifferent days.
Save me from this lonely space.
Whisper love 'till loneliness surrenders.
Come quick, let the angels enter..

[This message has been edited by Lexy (03-31-2003 09:01 PM).]

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

1 posted 2003-03-31 11:20 PM

Wow...I'm almost speechless. I love this sooo much!!
I'm not sure what to say, maybe I will come back to it...
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

2 posted 2003-04-01 09:37 PM

This one really struck home with me seeing that I'm in a simmilar situation in my life right now, perhaps a bit different then what you meant but still a beautifully written poem never the less! Enjoyable read
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-04-02 12:18 PM

Wonderful poem! I love it. And it appears alot can relate.
Great job!

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

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