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straindmind New Member
since 2003-03-24
Posts 9MI, usa |
The Big Guy By a.j. Out of breath out of sight nowhere to run I've heard them all Your dumb Your retarded Your fat Your not cool Am I you? Am I them? I don't care Never speak Never stay Never leave Here today You're gone tomorrow |
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SilentFreija Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 37 |
told you I was a fan. I love your writing. It's individual and awesome. Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me... |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
You did well on this, except in the middle you seem to be using the wrong spelling of you're...but that is quite alright, all it needs is a revision and you are set. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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SweetGhettoFlurt Junior Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 15Milw,WI |
Thiz wuz a real kewl poem. I liked it alot. *~*[email protected]*~*Marie*~* |
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straindmind New Member
since 2003-03-24
Posts 9MI, usa |
i love to hear from anyone. i'm still getting used to this site, so any tips or hints a definately welcome! thank you all for YOUR support! -a.j. |
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