Teen Poetry #6 |
Abrupt Halt |
Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
With all this stress I've gotta write and get it off my chest someone's gotta listen when I talk about my pain these tears glisten on my cheeks like newly fallen rain this is almost to real to even believe or see let alone to feel! I feel so hollow I can taste the pain in my tears I have to swallow my pride and not slip back to the years when I would've thought happiness was fake. Have I already lost what was at stake? My love, my heart, my soul. Come save me from the torment that I face everyday, I see it I wish it would leave without a trace dissapear forever lost in space never to return Abrupt Halt.... If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain. |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I like this one alot! All these 0's next to titles are disturbing, so many new people here not wanting to comment. I can really relate to this poem, well done! WinterWren |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Good job, Staci. This one was good. I think I might have to print it out! haha ~Jess "Poetry, she thought, wasn't written to be analyzed; it was meant to inspire without reason, to touch without understanding." -Nicholas Sparks |
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BrokenDreams Member
since 2003-02-09
Posts 425In The Clouds |
good job, hope you feel better soon. Jenni don't ever let others tell you who you are |
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