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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-29 09:00 PM

Love is nothing but time
the time it takes to say your on my mind
to find another angel like you
would take a lifetime to find

these are all the things
i never said and should have done
all the little games I played
that you somehow always won

I see eternity
when I look into your eyes
And i do get kinda jealous
when I see you with other guys

Love is everything
and nothing much
it just takes you and me
with the softest little touch

Everyday for me is heaven
when an angel is in my arms...

Dance
Junior Member

since 2003-03-28

Posts 34

1 posted 2003-03-29 11:41 PM

OMG! Beautiful. The words express everything that you feel when you fall in love.

~*~DaNcE~*~

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

2 posted 2003-03-30 03:16 PM

Nice poem

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2003-03-30 06:11 PM

VERY sweet poem! You expressed your thoughts well. I hope you showed it to whoever it's for.

WinterWren
"Even a fool knows that we cannot touch the stars, but that doesn't keep the wise from trying."

AJMGW
Member

since 2002-11-19

Posts 57
Galaxy Roller Rink

4 posted 2003-03-31 11:47 AM

Aaaaaahhhhhhh...
That was so sweet.
I really like that.
^*~AJMGW~*^

SilentFreija
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 37

5 posted 2003-03-31 12:55 PM

That was a great poem! Two thumbs up! This might just be me again, because I'm weird but I don't know about using, "Kinda" in a poem, but then again, it could be your unique thing! =] Don't eat me alive, I just try and say what I liked and what I didn't but I assure you, I loved it.

Where you look for broken hearts...you'll find me...
mend my broken heart and love me
because I forget how to smile.

Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-31 04:55 PM

thanx for the replies, and usually I don't use such slang in my wrk either but I wanted to give it a more juvenile feel more than anything else because it has been my experience that everything is better with a little bit of innocence on the side, especially love so I wanted it to sound like it really did come from the mouth of a teenager rather than an experienced poet. In any case thanx for the input.

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
-"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

SweetGhettoFlurt
Junior Member

since 2003-03-30

Posts 15
Milw,WI

7 posted 2003-04-02 09:42 AM

I really reallly liked this poem. It was very sweet!

*~*SweetGhettoFlurt@aol.com*~*Marie*~*

straindmind
New Member

since 2003-03-24

Posts 9
MI, usa

8 posted 2003-04-02 01:13 PM

girls can cause so much heartache, but they can make even the hardest jerk weak in the knees. Keep it up man!

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

9 posted 2003-04-02 05:51 PM

That was so beautiful...Argg! I hate when I'm gone for a few days because what I have to say has been said. Well, great job with this!
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

SixtiesChick03
Junior Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 49
NV

10 posted 2003-04-05 01:27 AM

I Totally loved your poem. I know all too well how that feeling is. Cant wait to read hear more of your poems. GREAT JOB!

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