Teen Poetry #6 |
untitled any ideas? |
wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
To drink or not to drink To screw or not to screw The teenage basics If we only listened to our parents To drink is a social status You are cool if you do your lame if you don't can't we all just get along Longing to hold on to what is true I want to rebel, out of the crowd I want to drink and do whatever I can is there any thing else? I have a constant whisper in my head I have something better for you Those will only please you for a little but my love, its eternal Why did I grow up in chruch All I did was hurt Surrounded by people who stare Longing for something thats, not there I have the picture in my head of the Rain movie Hes holding on to his son Telling him everythings going to be okay as the rain pounded by their feet He held his son close, told him he loved him He said that during the storm thats God Hes holding you tight Telling me everythings going to be okay I beg take this teenager away I might rebel but let me run back But for now, I am just going to sit and ponder everything you have done for me " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I like this, Mal. Interesting... All the things society tells us we're supposed to do as teenagers, yet, I really dont think I'm all that uncool for not doing those things. I dunno, maybe I really am a lame band nerd, but I guess that might be something I should be proud of. - Cody - |
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pearl6884 Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 72California coast |
there's nothing wrong with haveing fun now and then. *To see the world in a grain of sand, and heaven in a wild flower...Hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour...* |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
To tell you the truth, I'm horrible with titles.. but the first thing that comes to mind when reading this is "the status quo" Dunno if that helps or brings to mind anything. Good luck on the title... Oh! I liked this very much. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
personal conviction pearl...nothing against people. i agree i never said i don't have fun did i? anyone? " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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