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Teen Poetry #6

Awaiting the Sun

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2003-03-25 10:11 PM

Can’t figure out why I stand in the rain
while they run for the shelter of playing the game,
peeking over their shoulders with questioning stares:
“Can’t he see that there’s nothing to offer him there?”
And the water beads down over forehead and eyes
giving teardrops an adequate look of disguise
for a heart always tired, unable to run
to the shelter of all those awaiting the sun.

Albino_Jenn
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 105
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2003-03-25 11:55 PM

This is an awesome poem...good job...I look forward to reading more from you..you really express emotion well....
Jenn

**Hope is what Shields us from the harsh realities of life**

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2003-03-26 12:20 PM

Wow... This is awesome! Haven't seen you around here much lately, but I've always liked your work. I really liked this. Thanks for sharing!

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2003-03-26 12:34 PM

hey you sexy thing you! amazing poem hun! i miss talking to ya! anyways great poem i loved it.
robin

i am who i am and that's all that i am and all i shall ever be and if you don't like who i am then leave!

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