Teen Poetry #6 |
A.L.I.X. |
Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
Angels soar with a roar, and i dont notice my mind has but one focus.. even when you stray i still look up, and see the stars, and think of you and know I'm loved Loving you, makes the life oh so grand i could fly if i wanted... and theres only one place to fly too you and your arms... where forever i can be lost but still be found I love you... just doesnt seem enough if only you knew how much it hurts... not being there its enough to drive a man insane... just enough to run away and fly away for you my heart is yours X-rays and gama rays, is what they call it but i call it love struck, and happiness all the bad things just filter through.. leaving me with you the way i can only dream this isnt enough for her.... -lance There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
Just a question...but is this the Alex in Dayton by chance? Anyway, I really liked this and I'm sure she will too. Its very cute. I love how you ended this. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
lol... umm no mine is from somewhere else, lol sorry thanks im glad ya enjoyed it -lance There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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NSnaomian Member
since 2002-07-22
Posts 232In my troll closet I be |
*LoL* Don't I feel silly... You sound just like a Lance that my friend Alex knows... Same type of writing/style as well. I don't know him too well, but just a try I guess. Anyway... bye now. Laura "All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life." |
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Drummerboy06 Junior Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 46Indiana |
LANCE!!!! Yo, whats up? I knew it was you when I saw your profile. You probably have no clue as to who I am do you? Pyromania777 off SN. Lot of feeling in this piece, it shows how you feel for Alix. I like the line 'where forever i can be lost but still be found,' thats good, real good. Great piece, keep up the good work. Eventually the pain will go away, though it will take time. 'Cmon, perk up man! |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
lol drummer boy.. good to seeya.... there is no pain hehe this was my attempts at a happy poem, lol guess im just happy thanks -lance There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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Starsfalling Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 94some where deep in the shadows |
ummm NSnaomian if ur alex is from VA then maybe... lol otherwise its a wicked huge coincidence, hehe umm i dont think its the same cuz mines not from Daytona, lol dont feel silly though i sometimes do the same -lance There is no peace among the stars, only an eternity of carnage and slaughter and the laughter of thirsting gods |
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