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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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The day I came back was one of mourning The day I regret is come back to haunt me The hour I wrote this I was intoxicated It's really too bad I'm not still in there What a waste of life Will they remember me five years from now do I deserve it? The morning I realized no one cared was the minute I lost myself This day I came back Not happy, not sad this is the night I cry for happiness The clock strikes the hour for which I can not tell you The hour when I have no self-pity This is the minute This the right now This is the moment which I lived for The moment my love died. Regina |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Wow, this is terrifically dark... you did some great work organizing your thoughts here and bringing them all out at the end, with such a strong conclusion... Some very powerful work, Ina... good to see you posting again. Allan All images begin in mirrors and end inside our subconsious. ~Genesis P-Orridge, "Thee Reversal of Fate" [This message has been edited by Allan Riverwood (10-03-2002 11:22 PM).] |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
You know, it shocked me when i saw one of your poem's having only -one- reply to it. One of my fav poets of PIP and one reply. That's just terrificly sad, especially when this is such a strong write. But then again, from what I've read of you, your pieces always have a great bite to them. Which I happen to enjoy. Once again regina, another great piece. Very emotionally charged. Striking a chord in me as well.. -love- these parts: quote: and quote: beautiful ending dear. this is in the library. keep writing and i'll keep reading. hope everything is alright. *hug* tiff “A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.” Getting away, isn't Running away. "The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me." [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (10-10-2002 05:11 AM).] |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Hey Ina, glad to see you posting again, a very dark peice but wonderful to read, thanks for sharing  Andrew |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pretty deep there. I see you still write about melancolic topics, but you write them well. I enjoyed this poem here Regi....much love.  This message has been brought to you by the letter 'Y' |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
Hola Regi  Wow, this is just...*speechless*. It made me want to reach out and hug you. I could really feel this when I read it. I really do hope you're doing ok. It'll be nice to see more of your poetry here, I've missed it.
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
YOU'VE NEVER LOST YOUR TOUCH!!! it's always been a pleasure reaing your work i hope to see you on aim again we need to talk  thanks for the amazing read Ina là où est mon amour? |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ina~ Welcome back! It's great to see you posting again.This is a very well-written and powerful piece. I very much enjoyed reading this, and I hope to read lots more from you. Nicely done. ~Vicky P.S. Don't forget to check out Teen Challenge #2! "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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